@Vree  
I think coloring would help a lot with clarity, but the sheer length of the campaign and thus the comic means it would require hundreds of hours. Anyone who would like to try has my full permission. I am actually working on a colorized version of the cover page, for those who want to know what colors the characters are supposed to be. I’ll upload that between chapters.
 
I can promise that the setting does get easier to follow in chapter 2, which is coming up soon. Hopefully this week. Right now things are in a mountain cave filled with snow. Chapter 2’s settings are more distinct, and the plot is a bit more decompressed and self explanatory. I think you guys are going to like it.

@DSB71013  
The setting is extremely hard to follow/figure out, but your drawings are excellent, I’m sure with confidence you’ll get it right! :)  
Have you tried coloring yet?

I know it’s been a while since I posted, and I know this is bad. It’s taking a bit of work to salvage these into something just barely presentable. This is getting towards the end of the chapter, and by this point I was getting bored and trying to rush. I promise things get a lot better next chapter. Bear with me.