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Unfortunately I messed up in drawing this and left pencil trails from previous work on it, so I had to take a darker photo with my phone to hide them.
In this pic, I tried to draw Sonata Dusk using my own comic art style (which I’m developing). At first I didn’t intend for this to be a serious piece of work, but it turned out better than I expected. There’s another version of this work on my deviant art account, a sepia style of the same image. Here’s the link if you’re curious https://swordcat9.deviantart.com/art/Sonata-Dusk-1-737137337
In this pic, I tried to draw Sonata Dusk using my own comic art style (which I’m developing). At first I didn’t intend for this to be a serious piece of work, but it turned out better than I expected. There’s another version of this work on my deviant art account, a sepia style of the same image. Here’s the link if you’re curious https://swordcat9.deviantart.com/art/Sonata-Dusk-1-737137337
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What makes this work good? What do like about it? What could be better?
Answering the above questions would help me understand how to draw better for YOU!
Your comments and critiques will help! Let me know what you think.
Edited
My art style a mix of things: light and shadow rendering from traditional drawing,comic book style and anime style. In anime and particularly in comics, certain parts of the body are exaggerated on purpose.
It’s true, her neck is a bit long,but I kinda did it on purpose.I wanted her to look thin,tall just like the equestria girls characters.
But thanks for the critique,many artists (particularly sculpturs) tend to make the neck too long.
Comic styles are more forgiving and there’s a lot of leeway with comic art style. This work is intended to be a comic style drawing.
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