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Commission for https://www.fimfiction.net/user/244155/Lighttone+GryphonStar
Speedpaint: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POXv3e7YHRk&t=16s
A scene from the story Journey to Hearth’s Warming.
You can read the full story here - https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406700/journey-to-hearths-warming
and the particular chapter here - https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406700/10/journey-to-hearths-warming/episode-9-cold-blooded
Selected part the scene is based on - https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/884892/january-shedule-winter-commission-update-newly-updated-chapters-new-story-chapter-updates
Speedpaint: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POXv3e7YHRk&t=16s
A scene from the story Journey to Hearth’s Warming.
You can read the full story here - https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406700/journey-to-hearths-warming
and the particular chapter here - https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406700/10/journey-to-hearths-warming/episode-9-cold-blooded
Selected part the scene is based on - https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/884892/january-shedule-winter-commission-update-newly-updated-chapters-new-story-chapter-updates
Going uh isn’t helping me understand what wrong. Too much detail, not enough details? Are you just lost since the first part of the scene is meant to build-up to the comic strip? Once every detail has been shown off then comic strip can be found again in the blog alongside the scene in full.
Either way a lot builds up this gran event. Not just the parts I showed off in the link. Heck, this moment is practically the climax to a full season of work.
I would love far more criticism than just uh.
Edited
reads story summary
Uh…
reads blog post the scene is based on
UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH………..