@TheLoneLampman  
Im sorry D: Im still new here.  
I will be more careful, i promise :’)

@Aponty  
Nobody asked or forced you to do a criquite about this anyways.^^

Everyone calm your shit.
 
There’s no reason to get all worked up over what, best I can tell, was a misunderstanding of intention and tone.
 
Don’t escalate this further.

@rubyklum  
I’m only bitter about receiving such a negative response to my commentary.
 
Usually when I take the time to provide this kind of criticism, it’s for someone who is just starting out, wishes to improve, and thanks me for critique.
 
 
Next time I’ll save my critique for someone who will actually appreciate it.

@Aponty  
Wow… xD  
seriously you take it very seriously!  
You could say the same to Hasbro and other artists too? :3  
I don’t think so, everyone has their own way to do art! :) besides the artist draws for fun, it’s no prfesional artist or dedicated, it Draws just FOR FUN! xD  
Oh… Well, then you’re just a bitter xD

@Aponty
 
if you think you can improve and make an Perfect version of this, then draw this again!
 
If you don’t have nothing interesting to say, then don’t say anything at all.
 
Besides, the Drawing its Funny, therefore it is not focused on details.

@rubyklum  
No, this is what I meant by eye shape:  
 
eyes with constant curvature would result in extraordinarily blurry vision.
 
I’ve looked at their work. It’s all the same. I commented with a list of things that could be improved because I was depressed by how little progress they’ve made.
 
I never claimed to be perfect.
 
John Joseco is on my filter list.
 
Stop spouting nonsense at me.

@Aponty  
what ever, thats your opinion. But As I said before, I didn’t find any failure or disproportion in the shape of eye or whatever your trying to say about this, besides, if what you mean that ‘‘this’’ http://images.ocregister.com/newsimages/life/horsecontest/horse_main.jpg is as an example of what you want of the ‘‘Shape thing of her eyes’’ then all MLP universe are all wrong for that fact of the ‘‘eyes shape’’
 
Well. Like it or not, the artist continues to improve tremendously :) and If you believe that you can do better, then do a drawing and show us all your perfect way to do it right!^^
 
I still insist that you have to see the rest of his/her work on DA :)
 
One more think!
 
Is easy to be a critic who claims to know everything, but you can do some ‘‘Perfect’’ art? ;3

@rubyklum  
The point with the sclera was that the highlights are poorly placed and not representative of the way eyes are shaped. I don’t have any particular problem with oddly-colored sclera, but they helped to accentuate an ongoing issue with this guy’s works.

@Aponty  
I apologize for my outburst like that, I thought that it was wrong how you pronounced it towards the artist, i just think you could have done it better and in a more kind way, so again i apologize for that

@Aponty  
Hi! :)  
Umm You’re right but …  
you should know that the artist has made this drawing in order to make it funny, plus I don’t see anything very wrong with this picture simply because it’s funny for me and it seems rushed! but funny. xD in my opinion the details on this are not as inportant, only the meaning of comedy.:)
 
Perhaps Johnjosseco or Atryl are perfect at art? :) they got mistakes too! as Watcher of this awesme artist in DA, i saw ALOT of potential!^^ and you should see his/her other artworks!:) some of these artworks reminds me Jayaxer alot and some of them abit more impressive than the next! - just take a look at her/his gallery! ;3
 
And about The ‘‘Sclera thing’’ on the OC ^^ I invite you to see the backstory of this character before saying silly argument over the eyes. ;)
 
Have an Awesome day!

@Background Pony #DD2F  
Wow.
 

tiny hands
 
anime side-mouth
 
tail protruding from somewhere halfway up the spine
 
lighting coming from precisely the front, yet somehow causing shine-spots from all angles
 
ear hole beginning several inches from the head
 
dislocated shoulders
 
black sclera (wat) serve to make it obvious, from the way the eye-highlights fall, that her eyes have no lenses, or if they do have lenses they have the same curvature as the rest of the eye