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Hot Head: takes a deep breath Today’s the day! I’m gonna ask her!
 
Lucky: You said that before. And the time before that and the time before that
 
Hot Head: Okay, okay, I get it! I just really like this girl. I get nervous to talk to her is all…..
 
Amber: Why do you like her so much anyways?
 
Hot Head: I-I dunno. She’s really cool and nice to me and she says hi to me whenever we walk by each other and I think she might like me too…
 
Amber: How many times have you talked to her?
 
Hot Head: …….. I dunno. A couple times?
 
Amber: A couple times? Really? raises eyebrow Hot Head that doesn’t mean anything.
 
Hot Head: What do you mean? Nopony’s ever been nice to me like that before and
 
Amber: Just because somepony is nice to you doesn’t mean they love you
 
Hot Head: W-well, you and Lucky are nice to me. And you love me!
 
Amber: That’s different Hot Head. You’re family. Family love is different from love love
 
Hot Head: How would you know?
 
Amber: ………..
 
Hot Head: That’s what I thought
 
Amber: Whatever. Fine go talk to her then. But don’t come crying to me when your heart’s broken.
 
Hot Head: I will! storms out the door
 
Lucky: Good luck
 
Amber: huffs  

 
Hot Head: Alright. Just be cool. All you gotta do is ask her if she wants to go on a date sometime. Simple as that. spots Whirlwind Here goes nothing. trots over to her but stops
 
Whirlwind: turns around and spots Hot Head Hey! waves
 
Hot Head: gulps H-hi Whirlwind
 
Whirlwind: How are you?
 
Hot Head: I’m good. You?
 
Whirlwind: I’m great. Thanks for asking. So what brings you out here?
 
Hot Head: I’m just walking around. Getting some fresh air laughs nervously
 
Whirlwind: giggles That’s nice. It feels great to get out of the house every once in a while, huh?
 
Hot Head: Mmhm……….
 
Whirlwind: ………
 
Hot Head: …………
 
Whirlwind: ………..
 
Hot Head: coughs So um…. are you doing the same?
 
Whirlwind: No, well, kinda. I’m actually gonna practice for the Best Young Flyer competition in a bit
 
Hot Head: What’s that?
 
Whirlwind: You’ve never heard of the Best Young Flyer competition????
 
Hot Head: U-uh, no, I haven’t…
 
Whirlwind: It’s a competition in Cloudsdale where pegasi from all over get to show off their skills! The princesses and the Wonderbolts go. It’s a good way to promote yourself if you want a career in flying.
 
Hot Head: Really? W-wow. That’s cool.
 
Whirlwind: Sure is! This is the first year I’m trying. I finally got convinced. Say, how old are you?
 
Hot Head: Thirteen
 
Whirlwind: Hey, you’re old enough! Why don’t you try?
 
Hot Head: Should I?
 
Whirlwind: Yeah! I mean… if you want to. I’m not really sure what kind of life goals you have but if it involves flying, I think you should.
 
Hot Head: Sure. I’ll give it a shot.
 
Whirlwind: Cool!
 
Hot Head: So… What are you waiting for? Why don’t you practice already?
 
Whirlwind: I’m waiting for somepony. Oh here he is now! points upwards
 
Hot Head: looks up
 
Prism: The Best Young Flyer has arrived!
 
Whirlwind: Pfft, you wish
 
Hot Head: …….
 
Prism: lands and rolls eyes Well, I can fly better than you smirks
 
Whirlwind: Alright, alright we’ll just see at the competition.
 
Prism: walks up to Whirlwind Fair enough
 
Whirlwind: Y’know, just because you’re my coltfriend now doesn’t mean I’ll go easy on ya.
 
Hot Head: !!!
 
Prism: No worries. You won’t need to kisses Whirlwind
 
Whirlwind: giggles Prism!
 
Prism: notices Hot Head Who’s this?
 
Whirlwind: Hm? Oh! This is errmmm… Hot Shot?
 
Hot Head: H-Hot Head……
 
Whirlwind: Oh, that’s right! I’m sososo sorry! I’m really bad with names. Anyways, he’s thinking about entering the Best Young Flyer competition as well
 
Prism: Yeah? Well, don’t plan on winning kid, cuz I, son of Rainbow Dash and Soarin, will be competing as well. smiles proudly I plan on giving my all
 
Hot Head: ……..
 
Prism: You alright? You’re kinda quiet
 
Hot Head: I’m fine…
 
Prism: Hey, you wanna come practice with us? Since you’re gonna be entering and all? Me, Whirlwind and a couple of our Cloudsdale friends are gonna go practice in this super secret location. It’ll be fun
 
Hot Head: N-no, it’s okay. I can practice on my own… I-I gotta go flies back home
 
Prism: Oh. O-okay. Is he alright?
 
Whirlwind: I dunno……
 
Prism: That was kinda strange. Should I try follow and and ask him again?
 
Whirlwind: He looked like he needed to be somewhere. Maybe next time I guess.
 
Prism: Mmkay….. Let’s go then!  

 
Hot Head: steps back in the orphanage and looks to Amber
 
Lucky: Hey, Hot Head! How’d it go?
 
Amber: looks at him knowingly
 
Hot Head: runs to his room and slams the door
 
Lucky: …….. not good I guess.
 
Amber: sighs and gets up, following where Hot Head went
 
Lucky: Are you gonna talk to him?
 
Amber: Yeah… He’s gonna beat himself up about it if I don’t
 
Lucky: Okay….. have fun with that.  

 
Amber: opens door and steps in
 
Hot Head: Go away
 
Amber: I’m not going away
 
Hot Head: Why? You told me not to come crying to you after this
 
Amber: I didn’t mean it. Besides, I’m coming to you
 
Hot Head: I don’t want you here!
 
Amber: Hot Head, we need to talk about this, okay?
 
Hot Head: Well, what then??? You were right okay! Just like you always are!
 
Amber: Would you relax? I just want to know what happened
 
Hot Head: Why? So you can rub it in?!
 
Amber: I’m not here to tell you “I told you so”. Just tell me what happened.
 
Hot Head: ………………… she didn’t even know my name
 
Amber: …………..
 
Hot Head: And she has a coltfriend. And it’s that Prism Bolt guy! He’s such a jerk! And he’s rude and he’s mean to her and
 
Amber: How’s he mean to her?
 
Hot Head: He kept talking about how he was better at flying and all this other stuff
 
Amber: Hot Head, that’s just called flirting. Some mares like it when guys tease like that
 
Hot Head: But why??? Wouldn’t it be better to be with somepony who’s nice to them?
 
Amber: Well, you’d think but that’s just how it is sometimes.
 
Hot Head: That’s stupid! He’s stupid It’s so unfair!
 
Amber: Hot Head. That’s just how it is. You can’t just dislike “this Prism Bolt guy” because he’s going out with the mare you liked and barely ever talked to
 
Hot Head: What do you mean??? Amber, it’s more than that! He gets everything he wants! He has a friends, he has a family and now he has the coolest mare as his marefriend! He doesn’t do anything to deserve it. It’s totally unfair!
 
Amber: Sweet Celestia, stop being so emotional!
 
Hot Head: I have every right to be emotional!
 
Amber: Look, life’s hard okay? It’s unfair and you’re not always gonna get what you want!
 
Hot Head: But
 
Amber: No buts, Hot Head. I’m sorry life’s so hard for you but sometimes you just have to deal with it. If you just cry about it all the time, then nothing’s gonna get better.
 
Hot Head: When’d you stop caring?
 
Amber: I! Wha…
 
Hot Head: You used to be so nice and caring for me and Lucky. Now it just seems like you don’t care! All you do is party and hang out with random stallions
 
Amber: Are you kidding? I never stopped caring! You two are old enough to solve your own problems! I can’t baby you for the rest of your lives or else you’ll end up being emotional messes kind of like how you are right now. Also, if I didn’t care, I wouldn’t be here! I’ve had so many opportunities to get adopted and move away but I choose to stay here with you!
 
Hot Head: snorts
 
Amber: Fine. If you’re not gonna listen to me, I’m not gonna make you. You figure this out on yourself gets up to leave
 
Hot Head: ……….
 
Amber: kisses him on the forehead You can think whatever you want, but I do care about you and I always will. walks out the door
 
Hot Head: …………………….  

 
couple months later at the competition
 
Twilight: …. and the winner of this year’s Best Young Flyer is…….. Hot Head from Ponyville!
 
crowd cheers as he’s crowned
 
Twilight: Congratulations Mister Hot Head
 
Hot Head: bows Thank you Princess. It’s an honor
 
Prism and Whirlwind off to the side
 
Whirlwind: Wow! He was so good! I honestly wasn’t expecting that from him. I mean…… wow!
 
Prism: Yeah…….
 
Whirlwind: What’s wrong? Sad you got showed up by a little kid?
 
Prism: Tch, no
 
Whirlwind: Mmhmmmmmm. Woah look the Wonderbolts are talking to him!
 
Prism: looks up What’re they saying?
 
Whirlwind: listens carefully ……………….
 
Prism: ………………
 
Whirlwind: They just asked him if he wants to train with them!
 
Prism: They never asked me if I wanted to train with them………….
 
Whirlwind: I’m gonna go congratulate him. C’mon!
 
Prism: ………. follows Whirlwind
 
Whirlwind: Hi Hot Head! Congratz on your win! You were amazing out there!
 
Hot Head: O-oh, thanks! You did great too!
 
Whirlwind: Aw, nah. I need to practice a whole lot more. You should teach me some of those moves sometime!
 
Hot Head: Y-yeah. Anytime!
 
Whirlwind: Cool! ear twitches Oh, shoot, I think my parents are calling me. I gotta go! I’ll see you guys later. kisses Prism on the cheek
 
Hot Head: winces
 
Whirlwind: Bye! trots away
 
Prism: So, uh congrats the win. B-but next year, I’m winning for sure!
 
Hot Head: Heh. Don’t kid yourself. You’re not the hot shot anymore Prism Bolt
 
Prism: I excuse me?
 
Hot Head: Good luck getting on my level walks away
 
Prism: snorts

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LuminoZero

@animefan14
 
Kilala has only THREE ‘canon’ ships of her Next Gen characters.
 
Illusion (Dislestia) and Claire (Sparity)  
Anthea (Adopted) and Turquoise (Sparity)  
Valiant Heart (ShiningCadance) and Red June (Cheerimac).
 
Everything else is up in the air. Some pairings are more popular with the fans, but she has stated numerous times that those are the only three she is dead set on.
 
-Lumino
DanvilleBengal

I’ve got to ask, and I’m gonna put this comment on deviantArt as well, but I wonder, who is the mare that will cool off Hot Head and heat him up at the same time?? Obviously Whirlwind is taken, and to be honest it is kinda his fault because he never had taking actual steps like actually talking to her, instead of think that she’s so far out of his league that he believe he really didn’t have a chance. (Self-fulfilling prophecy) I hope that he understands that if he truly wants a marefriend (girlfriend) he cannot just be passive, he’s gotta take his lumps, get some stones, and really ask the mare out. All the mare can really do is say ‘yes’ or ‘no’ at that point–it’s out of his hands.
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The saddest thing is, there was potential for a friendly rivalry or possibly even a friendship between the two, Prism may have gloated a bit but he was far from mean to Hot Head, he even went as far as to invite him to train with them and tried to at least be a good sport and congratulate him even after losing. And instead of at least sucking it up and dealing with it, Hot Head just becomes an arrogant jerk and starts a rivalry just for the sake of spitefully one-uping Prism.
 
This is why I like PrismWind and always will, while they did break up and he’s still somewhat arrogant, he still knows humility and values her as a friend. While Hot Head may genuinely like her, he shows it in all the wrong ways and comes of as a spiteful jerk.
 
Heck, if he’d been a little more mature, things could’ve turned out differently:
 
Prism: “Hey, you wanna come practice with us? Since you’re gonna be entering and all? Me, Whirlwind and a couple of our Cloudsdale friends are gonna go practice in this super secret location. It’ll be fun!”
 
Hot Head: “N-no, it’s okay. I can…” glances at Whirlwind “…m-maybe I could go. I..don’t have many friends…”
 
Whirlwind: “Seriously? Well then come on, I’m sure the guys would love to meet ya!”
 
Prism: “Race ya!” flies off with Whirlwind “Hope you can keep up!”
 
Hot Head: hesitantly flies after them
 
-Sometime Later-
 
Whirlwind: “That was incredible!”
 
Hot Head: blushes “Th-thanks…
 
Prism: pats him “I gotta admit, you’ve got some skills. That being said, don’t get too cocky! I still plan on winning the competition this year!”
 
Hot Head: smirks “I wouldn’t get too full of myself, there’s always a first time for everything!”
 
Whirlwind: “Oooh!”
 
Prism: “Is that so?” Gets in Hot Head’s face, but then chuckles “Well then, we’ll just have to wait and see won’t we?”
 
Hot Head: “I guess we will!”
 
Whirlwind: “Alright boys, cool it down.” gets between them “Save it for the competition!”
 
Prism: “Right, right, well it’s getting late, we’d better head home. See ya Double-H!” flies off
 
Hot Head: “Wait, Double-H?”
 
Whirlwind: “Yeah, it’s a little nickname he thought up.” giggles “He thinks up nicknames for all his friends. That’s why he calls me Dubz! Anyway, I better catch up to him, later!” flies off
 
Hot Head: “Friends huh?” Watches them fly off to towards the sunset with a smile “…I guess that’s good enough…” makes his way back home…