I wont lie, this is pretty friggen hawt, once my charger comes in for my drawing tablet’s battery “since the micro-usb port has broken on it” I plan to remake this scene. I’ll probably add emphasis on an implied (light) semi-vore situation simply by making it seem unnaturally moist in there as well, alongside some other details. If you’re ok with fan art OwO
I know the storytelling is a mess, but in my defense, this is the first time I’m doing something story-driven with him. I’m not a writer(or at least not a good one). There is a story that goes along with this, but I’m not the one writing it.
… Oh! Why didn’t you say that from the start of my questioning? I mean, it’s hard to ask someone to improve when they’re just starting out… Also, I could be more accurate in stating that PONYVILLE lacks an authority-based system involving police… My apologies.
At any rate, I’d love to try some suggestions based around the direction you and the writer would like to take this story and the characters; the first step to character depth, bases itself on motivations behind their actions; why do they crossdress? Do they have people they care about? Do THEY know that they crossdress? Does anyone support this lifestyle he’s chosen? Do they know he’s in Ponyville, or is he just… going from place to place, crossdressing?
It seems like a lot of depth can continue on from here, and we haven’t even gotten to Rarity’s stance, in which she could’ve just stripped him of his clothes, and kicked him out from her boutique, yet chose not to. There’s a lot of depth that CAN be pushed upon, that’s for sure.
@Spearmint
This is Equestria; there are no authorities.
And who said he has nothing to his life outside of crossdressing? This crossdressing thing is a one-time occurrence. I know the storytelling is a mess, but in my defense, this is the first time I’m doing something story-driven with him. I’m not a writer(or at least not a good one). There is a story that goes along with this, but I’m not the one writing it.
@Spearmint
This is Equestria; there are no authorities. You’ve got a princess of Friendship who’d easily acknowledge community service over “nut-shots and embarrassment”.
And this still doesn’t disprove him having no reason to live; No family, no friends, just… crossdressing? Really? That’s what we’re expected to believe of this character? If they’re TALENT is crossdressing, I can understand it a bit better, but even then, what, they have nothing else to go back to?
@ShimmeringStallion
Notice that the top of the shell is closing. He wouldn’t be able to get out if he could. Besides, he’s learning that it’d be better for him if he just does as Rarity says, or else she will report him to the authorities.
As for the entertainment, you’ll just have to wait and see.
So… no bindings, no magic, no containment… he’s even POSED? Seriously; just rebel, already! What, he’s got absolutely no life to go back to? Like… none!?
I’ll be looking forward to it.
I wont lie, this is pretty friggen hawt, once my charger comes in for my drawing tablet’s battery “since the micro-usb port has broken on it” I plan to remake this scene. I’ll probably add emphasis on an implied (light) semi-vore situation simply by making it seem unnaturally moist in there as well, alongside some other details. If you’re ok with fan art OwO
Oh, okay.
I don’t know. Maybe it’s the tight space. Maybe it’s because beauties emerging from clams is a thing.
Because it’s a clam?
The concept of this individual slumbering within a clap appeals to me sexually.
What?
I’ll have to check with the writer first.
… Oh! Why didn’t you say that from the start of my questioning? I mean, it’s hard to ask someone to improve when they’re just starting out… Also, I could be more accurate in stating that PONYVILLE lacks an authority-based system involving police… My apologies.
At any rate, I’d love to try some suggestions based around the direction you and the writer would like to take this story and the characters; the first step to character depth, bases itself on motivations behind their actions; why do they crossdress? Do they have people they care about? Do THEY know that they crossdress? Does anyone support this lifestyle he’s chosen? Do they know he’s in Ponyville, or is he just… going from place to place, crossdressing?
It seems like a lot of depth can continue on from here, and we haven’t even gotten to Rarity’s stance, in which she could’ve just stripped him of his clothes, and kicked him out from her boutique, yet chose not to. There’s a lot of depth that CAN be pushed upon, that’s for sure.
And who said he has nothing to his life outside of crossdressing? This crossdressing thing is a one-time occurrence. I know the storytelling is a mess, but in my defense, this is the first time I’m doing something story-driven with him. I’m not a writer(or at least not a good one). There is a story that goes along with this, but I’m not the one writing it.
This is Equestria; there are no authorities. You’ve got a princess of Friendship who’d easily acknowledge community service over “nut-shots and embarrassment”.
And this still doesn’t disprove him having no reason to live; No family, no friends, just… crossdressing? Really? That’s what we’re expected to believe of this character? If they’re TALENT is crossdressing, I can understand it a bit better, but even then, what, they have nothing else to go back to?
Some element of Generosity Rarity’s being…
Notice that the top of the shell is closing. He wouldn’t be able to get out if he could. Besides, he’s learning that it’d be better for him if he just does as Rarity says, or else she will report him to the authorities.
As for the entertainment, you’ll just have to wait and see.