Few things here I wasn’t happy with, but the amount of work involved in drawing a page of this comic is ridiculous. So I’m not re-drawing it to sort them out.
That said, that first scene came out well, and the window in scene 2 looks okay too.
Parts I wasn’t happy with are Celestia’s snout and eye in scene 2, and Rarity’s eyes in the oath scene.
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Thanks. I appreciate the positive feedback, especially considering the lack of votes the comic has received so far.
I do tend to note if something is annoying me in one of my images. It seems to help with the vote responses as well. The comic is progressing slowly. I’m on with the next page where we see who that seventh pony is (although it’s pretty obvious anyway). There’s an eighth pony to join this group in chapter 3.
I will state this, there should have been 2 ponies going along with the main 6, but Twilight got the train to set off early, so the other pony doesn’t turn up till much later.