Help! Need to know how to make a story.

I am trying to write out and draw a fan comic, but I’ve got writers block, and I’m not sure if I am drawing well, since I get no feedback on what I need to improve.

Examples of the art, please?

@luna the great!  
Check out my art in my profile. :)

@Ponysubmarine  
As far as I can tell your art looks decent, and would make a good comic as long as you colour it. You could PM me what you’ve got so far on your writing.

Alright! :) I’m not very computer wise, but Ill try to do that.

It’s really easy, just click my usename and my page will come up. There you’ll find a ‘send message’ link.

Okay thanks :D