Help with Shading and Highlights

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I’d like a bit of input as to what I could do to make the shading and highlights on this wip look alright. The light source is obviously the fire. I have been drawing for six years, and I still don’t quite have the hang of shading and highlighting, so resources are appreciated too.
 
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My lazy man’s way of doing a night scene is just coloring a pic like it were daylight, then throwing a solid block of transparent gray-blue on top of it:  
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But if you need to know about general shading/highlights, you can search ‘shading tutorial’ on deviantart and get a lot of pic references. Sometimes I’ll just do a random youtube search for pic shading and sit through a few videos to get more ideas on how people color their works.
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Especially with a point source like a fire, you need to figure out where the light’s coming from and add shadows and highlights.
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