Derpibooru,
First time being here. I was suggested to come here from Reddit. This is a comic I wrote before Twilight got her wings. I wrote it as a hearthwarming present for my GF. I am not the best artist, but I like writing. Anypony is absolutely free to redo it. I prefer writing over drawing.
I tried to submit it to FIMFiction, but was told by a mod no, as it wasn’t a story, so it has been stuck without a home for years.