My Metal Slug x MLP fanstory hasn’t get 100 views. Lol
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Background Pony #1C69
@Background Pony #1C69
see on my ‘about me’. there’s link to my fimfiction.
see on my ‘about me’. there’s link to my fimfiction.
Background Pony #1C69
Background Pony #5BE0
If anybody is still alive here, well hi xddd
You know, I’ve had this stupid story idea in mind for a long ass time, always daydreaming about it. Only recently have I managed to get over my laziness and write at least the plot :V
[Hyperdenser]
It’s an OC only story with some references to cannon characters here and there (no, it’s not a next gen story :VVV), and it’s set around 150 years after MLP:FIM’s last episode. The princesses no longer exist, as they dissapeared mysteriously 100 years ago.
There’s also a “chapter 1” in the document. Read it if you want, but it’s just a shitty draft for now. You might cringe a bit :V
You know, I’ve had this stupid story idea in mind for a long ass time, always daydreaming about it. Only recently have I managed to get over my laziness and write at least the plot :V
[Hyperdenser]
It’s an OC only story with some references to cannon characters here and there (no, it’s not a next gen story :VVV), and it’s set around 150 years after MLP:FIM’s last episode. The princesses no longer exist, as they dissapeared mysteriously 100 years ago.
There’s also a “chapter 1” in the document. Read it if you want, but it’s just a shitty draft for now. You might cringe a bit :V
Background Pony #5BE0
@Tr4p3z1um5
Interesting.
Interesting.
It’s been a while, but I had another idea that I’ve been wrestling with, and I wanted to get some outside input before committing one way or another.
Anyway, for the story I’m writing, one of the threads follows two characters that have a dynamic fairly similar to Simon and Kamina from Gurren Lagann. Early on, it’s discovered that one of the two is a hero chosen by the gods, but either one could fit the criteria. Most everyone is convinced that the Kamina analogue, Baligant, is the chosen one, while Baligant himself is convinced that the Simon analogue, Sai, is the chosen hero.
Now, just like Kamina, Baligant was supposed to die- that was something I established well before I’d fleshed either character out. But I started thinking of turning the scenario around, and having Sai, the Simon analogue, die instead. The scenario of the tall, confident character being assumed to be the hero, only for it to actually be the weaker, overlooked guy is a bit overdone, so I thought it would make a decent twist for everyone’s initial assumptions to have been right, and that the actual hero really was the big guy all along.
Anyway, for the story I’m writing, one of the threads follows two characters that have a dynamic fairly similar to Simon and Kamina from Gurren Lagann. Early on, it’s discovered that one of the two is a hero chosen by the gods, but either one could fit the criteria. Most everyone is convinced that the Kamina analogue, Baligant, is the chosen one, while Baligant himself is convinced that the Simon analogue, Sai, is the chosen hero.
Now, just like Kamina, Baligant was supposed to die- that was something I established well before I’d fleshed either character out. But I started thinking of turning the scenario around, and having Sai, the Simon analogue, die instead. The scenario of the tall, confident character being assumed to be the hero, only for it to actually be the weaker, overlooked guy is a bit overdone, so I thought it would make a decent twist for everyone’s initial assumptions to have been right, and that the actual hero really was the big guy all along.
@Silent_Witness
castlevania thing?
castlevania thing?
@Silent_Witness
You said Simon
You said Simon
Background Pony #6379
@The Really Very Wery LAST UNICORN For Real, Bro!
Simon from Gurrenn Lagann.
Simon from Gurrenn Lagann.
Oh
Background Pony #5D2B
@Silent_Witness
Like the idea.
Like the idea.
Hi buds!! I can see here some talent. But I’m sure I’m no where near to be readable.
But I’ve got an idea and few lines done.
I would be extremely happy and thankful in return as artist to whom will help me refine this text
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fYlJXlat1BMkqSWSxciHfWVl6auHwVV0zjRq9pOLUwA/edit?usp=drivesdk
But I’ve got an idea and few lines done.
I would be extremely happy and thankful in return as artist to whom will help me refine this text
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fYlJXlat1BMkqSWSxciHfWVl6auHwVV0zjRq9pOLUwA/edit?usp=drivesdk
You can dm/ discord me RustedGold#4769
@Zlat Design
“But I’m sure I’m no where near to be readable”.
“But I’m sure I’m no where near to be readable”.
Don’t worry. None of us start off being “readable”. My lazy ass hasn’t even finished a chapter one yet xDDD
Do you already have a defined plot for your story? I feel like that would help a lot to understand what’s happening in your draft xddd
@Tr4p3z1um5
Sure it’s “ready” it is full story tho short, but it has start, introduce of character. Few lows and final drama moment with nice end
Tho it’s good for me, but i see it need some fixes, and i don’t know what to do next
Sure it’s “ready” it is full story tho short, but it has start, introduce of character. Few lows and final drama moment with nice end
Tho it’s good for me, but i see it need some fixes, and i don’t know what to do next
@Zlat Design
What story?
What story?
@Izzy Chan :3
Few posts up, there link to google documents, that’s the stuff
Few posts up, there link to google documents, that’s the stuff
@Zlat Design
It took a while to enter it. Lol, rip wifi.
It took a while to enter it. Lol, rip wifi.
@Izzy Chan :3
When you’re done, would be nice to hear any feedback
When you’re done, would be nice to hear any feedback
You know how in some media, a male character gets turned into a girl, and their love interest isn’t particularly bothered by it? Or a female character learns that someone they find attractive and thought was male is actually female, but it doesn’t damper their attraction? I know that its semi-unthinkable in the present day, but just like the trope of everyone assuming the swaggering barbarian is the hero that will save them when its actually the scrawny guy they don’t give a second thought about, I find “If Its You It’s Okay” a bit overdone, and wanted to defy (or at least play around with) it in my story. And I wanted to see what others might think about where I take that.
In the first instance (I haven’t actually decided what order these will play out in), due to an accident, the male lead ends up being turned into a girl for a while. It does eventually wear off, but until he turns back, one of his companions- a yandere type who’s otherwise completely obsessed with him- actually loses all interest in his female form, only coming around once he’s male again. Granted, another party member who’s into other women takes an interest in the male lead while he’s a girl, though she’s rather very hesitant at first, and it takes some serious coaxing from another character before she makes a move on him.
In the second instance, a minor character is a woman that has been living as a male for several years- she was the squire of a famed monster slayer, and after he was fatally wounded, she assumed his identity so that his legacy would live on. When circumstances force her to reveal her real identity, one of her comrades who had a crush on the male persona is actually repulsed to find out that the person she was attracted to was another girl.
In the first instance (I haven’t actually decided what order these will play out in), due to an accident, the male lead ends up being turned into a girl for a while. It does eventually wear off, but until he turns back, one of his companions- a yandere type who’s otherwise completely obsessed with him- actually loses all interest in his female form, only coming around once he’s male again. Granted, another party member who’s into other women takes an interest in the male lead while he’s a girl, though she’s rather very hesitant at first, and it takes some serious coaxing from another character before she makes a move on him.
In the second instance, a minor character is a woman that has been living as a male for several years- she was the squire of a famed monster slayer, and after he was fatally wounded, she assumed his identity so that his legacy would live on. When circumstances force her to reveal her real identity, one of her comrades who had a crush on the male persona is actually repulsed to find out that the person she was attracted to was another girl.
Background Pony #78B2
@Zlat Design
Same.
Same.
@Silent_Witness
Sounds good. I would read something like that.
Sounds good. I would read something like that.
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