@Tetrominon  
I know what you mean with the repeating faces. I’ve only really done it this way for conversation scenes. There’s not a lot of those in the rest of the story. These pages were just explaining what’s going on and why. I think chapter 3’s speech amounts to the equivalent of 2 pages of what’s gone before.
 
Bit of action next.

Your layout and composition still need a lot of work - all these close-up panels of talking heads may as well have been copy-pasted, and the repetition makes reading a chore. Those last two panels are a step in the right direction, though it would have been a more dramatic reveal in the last one if you’d broken up Celestia’s line so that she was saying “I pray for your success” as they all looked out onto the hopeless deathscape that is the 40k universe.

Here’s hoping this gets a better reception than the last page I did for the comic.
 
My daughter’s still pestering me for more of this story, so on with the next page I guess.
 
Her favourite part up to press is the page where Pinkie’s in Lyra’s face >>980786  
I was quite happy with how that part played out. Got Pinkie’s character spot on there.