@Dusk Ealain  
If you’re looking for realistic vore I think you should look up fanfictions on Aryion. I personally found the realistic ones anti-climactic but there’s something for everyone in there.

@Damaged  
Yep, I wouldn’t expect it to be 100% realistic, but I always find the “But it’s X!” _{(usually, something fetish or Pinkie related)} as a cop-out for criticisms about the [insert thing here]’s logic to be really obnoxious.

@Dusk Ealain  
Heh, mostly hyperbole, since people are asking other silly questions, when the big ones are so completely ignored by the genre.

@Damaged  
Logic has already been breached.
 
Not to mention stuff like that’s already a big part of vore, dare I say a trope even.

So nopony thinks it odd that she can still scream despite being compressed by strong muscles, surrounded by acid, and having no air to breathe?

I kind of find it amusing that everything but her undergarments dissolved.

@snow360  
While I can understand that, I also don’t think that’s really a big excuse. I’ve met several people from several nationalities who can use English just fine.
 
When you’re writing for art, literature, etc. you should at least get somebody or something to check everything if you’re writing in a language you’re unfamiliar with. (Or in this day ‘n’ age anything.)

@dzamie  
Hehehe, well, writing is easy for me.

The good ending :)

Looking at the artist DA page, the person lives in Thailand. I see his other snake comics has similar grammar structure. I guess english was a second language and still need editing.

@Dusk Ealain  
Oh, I know. I use LanguageTool in LibreOffice myself, even have the ngram stuff set up. Makes me look like a much better writer than I otherwise would. :)

@FlyingHorseman  
Well, let’s hope you can exceed them in their grasp of the English language. It’s worse than hentai dialogue.

@Blissey1  
Saliva yes, I was referring to enzymes and particularly acid. Which would be a yellowish-green color.
 
Ya ruined it by taking it too literally.

@Dusk Ealain  

 
uhh, she is quite clearly covered in fluids.

@Damaged  
You don’t even need to find someone to do it, you could just install something like Grammarly or just use an online service to check your grammar. There’s a lot of free ones out there.

@Dusk Ealain  
Just makes me a little sad that they couldn’t have found anypony to proof their text for this. I slapped “grammar error” tags on all four pieces.

Amazing job! I can only take you as inspiration in the hopes of someday achieving beautifully made works like you!

@Damaged  
ikr that got me as well…
 
I can only think of some weird paradox in which the snake is Octavia, all the while, the human is Octavia too…

“I begin to slow digest me”
 
“I begin to slowly digest”

-Take a shot if your vore series starts with “I was walking through [location]” or any variant of that phrase. (two if it’s for no apparent reason)  
-Take a shot if it ends with “Now I can only scream/struggle/wait/etc as the [predator] begins to slowly digest me” or any variant of that phrase.  
-Take an extra 3 shots if, at any point, clothes are completely digested without any sign of skin damage. (Double if the underwear magically stays intact.)  
-Take an extra 3 shots if there is no apparent fluids at all within the stomach.
 
Secondly, typo. “All I can do is shout as I begin to slowly digest me.” wat?
 
In all honesty, while I prefer Octavia as a pred more than prey, and using snakes will always feel like cheating to me. (It’s too easy in my opinion, nagas are one thing, but snakes are just too… I want to use “predictable” but I’m not sure if that’d be accurate.) The artwork itself is rather well made, good job Arniro.

@Background Pony #6F55  
Biology is just a mystery, like magnets.

How does her clothes dissolve first without affecting her skin? 🙂