@Thorned Rose Ninja  
She’s just a lil too self-conscious, there’s nothing to be ashamed of anyway.
 
@RarityIsTheBestHorse  
Thanks, rarifeets are always lovely, especially paired with AJ’s.
 
@ExTor  
Oh wow, that’s certainly an extensive and detailed review, covering pretty much everything. I’m very flattered by your attention to all the lil details that I like putting into my work, not everybody notices them. You providing a rather thought-out description and suggestions along the way did help a lot, and motivated me to do a better job.
 
In overall, I’m satisfied with the result too and only thing I’d add/fix is a couple of lines that I think mess with the perspective. I guess they’re the kind of minor-ish stuff that bother artists for no real reason.
 
 
Thanks again for the review and your preference!

I’m kind of a goober, I completely forgot to leave you a comment. Yeah I got nothing for that. I do have a comment, though.
 
So I’m pretty sure AJ’s are the best feet you’ve drawn. I used to wonder if your style won’t look as good cleaned up, but nope, it does. Unlike some other fetish artfags, you actually can draw varying sizes of feet, and you do that really well - most often it’s just a one size fits all situation for most people. A pretty integral part of this pic was the size comparison between rarislut and AJ, and you absolutely pulled that off. While I did design the poses specifically so the effect would come through, you executed it just right.
 
On which note, you made AJ’s crossed-ankle taut smug careless feet and Rarity’s embarrassed scrunching toots EQUALLY good, somehow. I wasn’t expecting that in the best of cases, because if im honest I was edging more on the side of AJ as far as this concept went, even in my imagination. All the wrinkling practice you did in your early days went to good use.
 
A special note should go to how you handle this sketchy quasi-shading thing of yours. I was almost skeptical, but seeing the light grey smudgy effect actually work has me fairly convinced you do need more commissions, just so you can work on pics for longer. Even the blushing worked out.
 
Rarity, by the way, has a very very very attractive looking design, as far as her clothes go. Not only did you capture how she’s visibly smaller than AJ (yes im turned on by that kek), but you didn’t make her look way too proper, she’s suitably urban but still Rarity. AJ’s clothng design being more minimalistic works as it points more attention at rarity, and it kind of suits Aj herself. Plus, most of her is obscured by the feature presentation.
 
The shoe dangle with her finger was pretty ingenious by the way, while I did sideways suggest her holding Rarity’s footwear, somehow this didn’t occur to me so this was a pleasant, fitting surprise. The authenticity with which you pulled off applesack’s big gal tough presence gives her the credit necessary to make the absolute sluttery she’s performing look feasible and almost not OOC. Somehow, coming up with scenarios like this, I still bother about characters being in character, huh.
 
And finally, the one thing I was impressed the most with by far, the background. As I said to you in private, I’m a bit astounded you actually did it. It kind of does more than everything I wanted it to? I had like, vague shapes and punctuation populating a bit of the background in my mind, but you actually shoved in some characters. They may have been a risk, but a well taken and calculated risk. You must have known what you were onto when you rolled with this idea, and you did. Several faces we can see, physics almost don’t break, more than two polar reactions, occupying enough to be a thing on its own but not too much to truly distract (still did ask for the alt, and thanks for doing it)… Well that impressed me the most by far.
 
I’m pretty sure my wallet does run the threat of another picture by you. Maybe even in the coming months. Gr8 job m8.

I love this so much!

Somebody’s embarassed about exposing her little toesies!