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first time making a little comic would love to here some feed back
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+-SH suggestive195036 +-SH artist:vo-photoshop10 +-SH princess celestia115414 +-SH twilight sparkle366078 +-SH alicorn327296 +-SH pony1660733 +-SH unicorn564774 +-SH g42093158 +-SH abdominal bulge10350 +-SH accidental vore179 +-SH bed61122 +-SH book45069 +-SH comic138577 +-SH dialogue97612 +-SH female1867919 +-SH fetish59522 +-SH horn222027 +-SH magic99778 +-SH pillow26884 +-SH princess vorestia577 +-SH soft vore1561 +-SH spread wings101455 +-SH stomach noise5209 +-SH teleportation794 +-SH teleportation mishap39 +-SH teleportation vore26 +-SH televortation26 +-SH unicorn twilight36109 +-SH vore19800 +-SH vore comic13 +-SH wings239840
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your not looking are you https://derpicdn.net/img/2015/2/26/837540/large.png
Thanks so much radpanic for the feed back!!!
The outline of Celestia’s belly doesn’t match up with her chest, so it looks like the belly just abruptly ends behind her foreleg. I’d suggest editing the chest to make it match.
And the dialogue needs punctuation.