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first time making a little comic would love to here some feed back
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+-SH suggestive196475 +-SH artist:vo-photoshop10 +-SH princess celestia116379 +-SH twilight sparkle369112 +-SH alicorn332428 +-SH pony1683007 +-SH unicorn573762 +-SH g42112475 +-SH abdominal bulge10526 +-SH accidental vore179 +-SH bed62281 +-SH book45524 +-SH comic139624 +-SH dialogue98997 +-SH female1891337 +-SH fetish60302 +-SH horn232709 +-SH magic100926 +-SH pillow27414 +-SH princess vorestia584 +-SH soft vore1571 +-SH spread wings103817 +-SH stomach noise5294 +-SH teleportation798 +-SH teleportation mishap40 +-SH teleportation vore26 +-SH televortation26 +-SH unicorn twilight36903 +-SH vore20087 +-SH wings245213
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your not looking are you https://derpicdn.net/img/2015/2/26/837540/large.png
Thanks so much radpanic for the feed back!!!
The outline of Celestia’s belly doesn’t match up with her chest, so it looks like the belly just abruptly ends behind her foreleg. I’d suggest editing the chest to make it match.
And the dialogue needs punctuation.