@Prince Areo  
Me too

@Background Pony #F00D  
The fuck are you talking about?
 
You do realise the coloured edits are made by another person right? There’s even two versions of this image on the site already.

I can dig her.

Waifu material

@Master_Dufel  
No problem

@bob  
Thanks for taking the time to write this out dude  
I think the upper body was supposed to be twisted to face the viewer more, but I don’t think I made that consistent enough, so it just feels disconnected from everything. Probably could’ve made it more in-plane with her lower body too. And the arm and elbow I agree with, I don’t think I placed them well enough to show her resting on it.  
This was also after I already decreased her bust too lmao

Dufel delivers with a lovely chunky Rarity.

Oh my, yes! This is simply divine!

The heels look a bit odd to me, and I see the criticism about the neck as well. Over all good though. Those legs are amazing.

Words cannot do this hot piece justice…Dufel has delivered well.

@Badheart  
A good cartoon!
 
But Dufel asked.

It’s a cartoon!
 
@Master_Dufel  
You did good on this.

@Master_Dufel  
The fact that the head is raised so high from this laying down position suggests an uncomfortable spinal bend.

Always great seeing plus-sized Rarity art… ❤️

@Master_Dufel  
It feels like the upper body’s angle is divorced from that of the lower body. There’s probably a way to do a twisting, but I think it’d involve having either the fat or clothing around the ribs being visibly tugged and tightened. Alternatively, working more on the foreshortening could alleviate the issue.
 
Rarity’s shoulders look like they’re missing a bit of the underlying skeletal structure. That should be fixed prior to adding layers of fat. I don’t understand what’s going on with her elbow, but it feels rather off. Also, unless Rarity is muscle-heavy, her arm-mass could use a bit of sagging and re-distribution.
 
Lastly, this might be a stylistic choice, but Rarity’s tits seem to be balloon-like. If you aren’t aiming for that, you might want to cut down the size a tad, and redistribute the mass at the top towards the bottom to deal with fat-sag.

@bob  
Could you give some examples? I remember struggling with the upper body a bunch here and would appreciate critique.

I can’t fav this pic enough!

I still think she’s cute.

@bob  
I agree.  
Sometimes you get to drawing and you get a good thing going, and trying to make a whole picture out of that one good thing turns out more trouble than it’s worth.

Looks like most of the effort went into the waist down. Upper body has several anatomic issues that Dufel hasn’t previously had.

Holy mother of fuck…that pic is so hot I think my apartment just caught fire.