I have a lot of problems with the overall comic, but I’ll at least say that the artwork is great and well shaded. However, there is also hardly any background for most of the comic which makes it feel like they’re more in limbo than a city or Rarity’s boutique or on a train.
 
My biggest issues are with the flow of the story because it’s poorly done. The story keeps swapping between Rarity and the rest of the mane six every one or two pages making this inconsistent, but I ended up completely ignoring the mane six’s side after we found out Rarity was still at home. You gave away the twist to early, and because of that I had no reason to bother reading their story because it just lead up to what the readers already knew: Rarity was not in the city. If you had structured the story around the mane six’s side first and then put in Rarity’s half when they found out the truth then I would have read their half, but instead it feels like there’s two comics going on at the same time butting for attention and one of them is completely pointless to listen to. Because what reason do I have to read their half when I already know the conclusion? Another issue is how out of character some of them are. I don’t believe Discord would ever team up with somepony who tortured Fluttershy’s friend. He may be a prankster, but he would never engage in flat out torture for a dress. Not to mention there is literally no reason for him to do any of this he can literally made a pile of gold coins appear with a snap of his finger he could have just paid her for the dress. As for the antagonist Blue Nile I don’t believe anyone would ever go this far for revenge. She already got it in the first comic I don’t see why she feels justified to any of this especially when she threatens her with a spiked spanking machine that would have definitely left incredibly painful injuries and scars just for a dress. Finally I was completely disgusted by the scene where spike rapes Blue Nile. Spike as a character would never do something like that, and despite everything she did I don’t believe Rarity would ever be okay with spike doing that. The spanking was justified after three whole comics of her torture, but the rape was taking it way too far. Overall it’s a decent comic witch could still be salvaged a bit if you renumber them to make the story flow better or just separated the rest of the Mane six’s side into a different comic

So she finally targets the right mare? I know I suggested it on some picture once. ^^ I’m curious. Was that also a plan from the beginning or something that was decided later on?

Well, it looks like the fun is over. For now. This was definitely very wild. Thank you for posting this.

Discord looks good in that dress ^^

a so… bit rushed ending…  
even i if hoped Rarity get his deserved revenge after merciless spanking and humiliation

@Background Pony #5AE2  
Apology accepted. Please try to be more mindful in the future. I appreciate your sentiment and forgive you. I wish you well, dearie.

Is it too late for a Spike and Rarity sex scene?

@Midori Kuroba  
In case you haven’t noticed, it was me, Trini-Mite, who wrote that. I am deeply sorry, I will never bother you again. I truly went too far. I couldn’t take the suspense.

@Background Pony #AED8  
Thank you for that. I have no idea why this comic drew in so many crazies over the course of it’s life. But now that it’s over, they’ve all moved on I guess. It’s quiet now, heh.
 
@Kulta kai  
NEXT?! We’ll I can give you an idea from what I’ve been told by Circe. First of all she’s going to take a few weeks to relax and enjoy the holidays. Take a break, you know? Then, I believe she’s going to participate in a pony art pack, not a lot of details on that right now. And after that? She’ll probably work on more random art commissions before doing a comic with ponies again, though, I do know she has one in mind. No telling when it will all come, or what exactly it will be, but I’ll be there when it happens, personally. =P

@raw19  
Haha very funny. I mean what’s next for the comic

So what did Midori tell you and me? No blood, no gore, no death, nothing to worry about. Everything went just fine.
 
I’m so sorry that I went too far…

@Kulta kai  
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So what’s next

Thank you for the comic, Mina & Circe!

The rides over. I found it weird, confusing, sexual…and fun.
 
Most interesting.