@Arcan
I don’t have photoshop, so the only thing I use to do minor edits in my work is GIMP. I also try to avoid “serious” edits (like smoothing out edges of the model) since it’s very hard to make such edit unnoticable.
I’ll try out fogging eyes, but I never were a fan of it, as it always looked a bit “out op place” on SFM characters.
As for NSFW stuff, Im working one one right now.
Af for manes, on that pic I have already explained that I’m still not able to get a “good looking” effect while removing those. As much as getting golden brown on BJ would be easy, I dont think it would come out good on Calamity (since his normal coat color is rather dark).
@AWGear
As for critique or ways to improve it. I think the hind legs could use a bit work in photoshop to hide the way they clip inside the rups. Beside that i would dim/fog over the eyes a little when they are dead.
More i could tell when you get to the NSFW stuff. :P
Also about this version >>2015138 The color is a bit to dark. You could try making one with the eyes open but grey them out completely or if you plan on leaving them like this then at least maybe take away the manes and tails. It look strange when they are so much cooked. If they were golden roasted then you could keep their manes in normal color! :D
Cooking twine is very hard to make in SFM to look good,
I left out sweating due to the fact that 1# It would take alot time to apply that to 3 characters, 2# Because they are already dead, and I dont think that corpses sweat.
Better Facial Expressions? Eplain Please.
I’ll make sure to improve my art, but I’d appriciate more concrete feedback ^^
@Nebbie
I mean, they are dead, I just put them in “questionable way”.
I had a Calamity and Glory roasting/NSFW comic in the works, but that was way before I learned doing “better lights”. I don’t know if it’s worth it tough. It was preety long.
@AWGear
Well, they just look kinda dead to me. Although I would like to see how they were actually spitted, perhaps a powerful unicorn put them in such positions and made them all blush before ramming the rod in.
@Background Pony #37D7
They already have thier muzzles inside eachother ^^
I tought about “implied sex” tag or something like that :P
P.S.
Blackjack looks like she already enjoys that :P
pointing with wings Eyyyyy
That’s Calameaty for you :P
I’d maybe go for Calamity.
Bet that Dashite branding makes it smokey
I don’t have photoshop, so the only thing I use to do minor edits in my work is GIMP. I also try to avoid “serious” edits (like smoothing out edges of the model) since it’s very hard to make such edit unnoticable.
I’ll try out fogging eyes, but I never were a fan of it, as it always looked a bit “out op place” on SFM characters.
As for NSFW stuff, Im working one one right now.
Af for manes, on that pic I have already explained that I’m still not able to get a “good looking” effect while removing those. As much as getting golden brown on BJ would be easy, I dont think it would come out good on Calamity (since his normal coat color is rather dark).
As for critique or ways to improve it. I think the hind legs could use a bit work in photoshop to hide the way they clip inside the rups. Beside that i would dim/fog over the eyes a little when they are dead.
More i could tell when you get to the NSFW stuff. :P
Also about this version >>2015138 The color is a bit to dark. You could try making one with the eyes open but grey them out completely or if you plan on leaving them like this then at least maybe take away the manes and tails. It look strange when they are so much cooked. If they were golden roasted then you could keep their manes in normal color! :D
I dunno…
There is something about Blackjack here that looks exceptionally apetizing ^^
@Background Pony #6CBA
I saw both of those pics.
I’ll make sure to improve my art, but I’d appriciate more concrete feedback ^^
All I ask is make it more detailed. Check out icaron’s: 1668524 and 1668525
Make it shorter and missing stuff you can add as short stories/description under the page. ;P
I don’t think I’m gonna finish a 29 panel comic till the end of the year xD.
Maybe I should write something shorter?
Just do it. :P
I mean, they are dead, I just put them in “questionable way”.
I had a Calamity and Glory roasting/NSFW comic in the works, but that was way before I learned doing “better lights”. I don’t know if it’s worth it tough. It was preety long.
Well, they just look kinda dead to me. Although I would like to see how they were actually spitted, perhaps a powerful unicorn put them in such positions and made them all blush before ramming the rod in.
I have a few ideas. I’ll try to work on them soon ^^
You need to start 1st. :)
If enough people will like to see those, I’ll make sure to start doing NSFW content ^^
Yea. :D But like you said this angle dont really show it that well. :P DO IT! :3 hehe
They already have thier muzzles inside eachother ^^
I tought about “implied sex” tag or something like that :P
P.S.
Blackjack looks like she already enjoys that :P
Edited
Flip the roast to be standing up and they will slide nicely into eachothers butts/p***. And that would look HOT! :D
It wouldn’t be visible in this shot xD
I’ll start useing them at some point. I’m practicing it atm.
For now you can use your imagination :P
As long as they are eaten, Yeah ^^