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Amen.
Edited
I think you’re doing fine so far. As a device to provide a larger context for all these fun games and sexy pictures, I find the story to be perfectly serviceable.
Sure, it’s not exactly a deep or complex narrative, but it doesn’t really need to be. Though if you’re planning to step it up, then by all means go ahead. ‘3’
We’ve got good chapters going on with the storytelling Jon you still got it still learn but you got it :)
Happy milestone!
Live and learn, I’m still very much learning how to tell a story, so I’ll take what I’ve learned here and improve come next chapter
@fredsworth
We can probably just keep referring to her as Applejack since it’s more an alternative costume rather than a whole redesign like some of the other NMW characters
For admitting the plot is contrived, you have my respect. But still, doing something you know will be met with…controversial reactions, I’ll say, that has my concerns.
It isn’t that so much, and that is understandable, but at times it feels like every time someone takes a step forward in this, something causes them to take two back is all
@Jmaster99
I’ll be honest, most of this was plot contrivance to balance out the sides better, and also a lot of content was cut for the sake of getting this done sooner
It is like they manage to save a friend, only for the bad guys to show they have a weapon they always had to change two to evil
I don’t mind the bad guys winning once in a while, I just don’t want it to be too easy. It just invalidates the story and MASSIVELY undermines the heroes to an insulting level.
Eh, easy come, easy go. The Nightmare Forces have a faster revolving door than a comic book afterlife.
Everyone in-universe is already kind of a hooker if you think about it