Waving her treats up in the air and jumping like she just didn’t care, the party girl’s whole chubby body bounced along as she joyfully skipped across the front of Canterlot High.
“Can I have one?” One student asked.
“Yeah, me too?” Another wondered.
But before anyone else could even get the chance, she would greedily stuff the yummy treats into her hungry mouth. “Whoopsie, too late,” she’d say, timidly laughing and shrugging it off.
Hey, can’t beat the original.
And you did it first!
Don’t get me wrong, yours still was a good effort though and I liked it a lot back then. Neon’s just a bit better proportion-wise.
Edited
Well, Neon has had more experience than I did back then.
Have to admit it though: yours does look better.
and same