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Bluesliver The sphinxlover
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab

The sphinxlover
Already in the first 20 we can see how the characters are. Rabble is a fighter but she is also very strategic. She analyse the battlefield to find the best way to win. Here we discover she are a bit a bully, since she shoot direct on Butter Muffins face there clear was distracted by her partner and their fight. She seems not to even care much about it, or as the most clear sign is that Rabble is a mare there is focusing on winning, no matter what it cost.
 
Queen Pawn seems to be a character there easy can be nervous or need support from others, since she hold on Butter Muffins back. Pawn is a girl you easy can manipulate or kick down on the floor, and she will not fight back. Pawn tried at least to get the bold and revenge Muffin. Butter is different from her big sister, Spicy. Not just by her look, but her personality shows that she are more social and are better to fight her own battles than Spicy. There on the floor, Butter want to fight back and show she can stand up, but is really tired that Pawn is so unstable and can’t be there when she need her.
 
Again we gets a clear pic of what a bully Rabble is. I was close to call her one of the more disturbing ones when she was ready to throw that ball in a head on the innocent Pawn. But, and it maybe sounds strange, she was nice enough to just let the ball fall on Pawns head and end the battle. Like i said before, she enjoy to win and is not afraid of do what there needed to get here. That also make the plaster she has on her nose make it more clear. You will sure not get that if you don’t take risks.
 
And what about Silk Stocking? Well, she seems more neutral about it, like a character there is in the group but more see it all from the sideline. Silk has seen all this before and seems to hope her friends will improve them self and grow as persons, but always realise they just repeat them self.
 
The whole animation shows what friendship these girls have. It does not feel like a healthy one, but it could also be a bad day for them all (except Rabble). Its really great to show so much characters in a short time, and i feel everypony gets a moment to show them who they are. Silk could maybe have got a bit more. Not sure what, but she could needed a bit.
 
The animation style feels great but has its lacks sometimes. Like where Rabble and Pawn run against each other and we can see them not run right on the floor. But it is so short that we almost not discover it. The scene where Rabble enjoy her victory on Silk also feel it needed something with the hands. They was so flat that they feel dead.  
As a animation of sport, you did a very great one. I am impressed how you put all this together and could make something we feel we have seen in a movie or relate on from the real life.
 
All in all, a animation there already became one of my favorites from you. Despite most of your art is nsfw, then its a really nice break to watch something sfw and get a moment to see your talents of storytelling without voice actors and dialogues. It really says much, and i love these differences there can be in your art.