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“Scootaloo Loses At A Bet”
Sweetie Belle: Aww! You look so adorable, Scoots!
Scootaloo: I have nothing against cheerleading or anything, but I look really stupid right now.
Apple Bloom:Yer rockin’ out that cheerleader look! Ah love it!
Stories aside, can any other fellow artist give me some advice on my art style, coloring, shading and all that stuff? I mean, I’ve only started drawing for the fandom like 1-2 years ago (though I’ve been a brony for 6-7 years), and I wanna know how can I improve :))
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Yay! Tsym for this!!
Style: Hooves seem fat (they bulge in the middle too much), snouts seem too high up on the head, noses feel too sharp, necks seem overly wide, chests seem too relatively big, and ears seem too wide and too sharp on the end. Altogether this gives the feel of very chubby ponies that are simultaneously a bad idea to touch due to sharpness, and on Bloom seems even out of perspective.
Coloring: Sweetie seems too dark, everything else is fine.