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Supernova: Hello there
Luna: Ah! Oh, you startled me.
Supernova: I apologize for scaring you. I didn’t mean to. I guess it’s just a habit.
Luna: Habit?
Supernova: Yes ma’am. I’m a night guard and I specialize in suprise attacks. Not that I’m going to attack you. That’d be bad.
Luna: That’s……. fascinating. Well, I’ll be on my way then.
Supernova: Woah, woah, woah, woah. You don’t think I came all the way over here just to scare you do you?
Luna: Oh, forgive me. Are you in need of something?
Supernova: Just some of your time.
Luna: …….?
Supernova: I’d just like to talk. Get to know the Princess of the Night a little better.
Luna: …. Okay?
Supernova: So what’s your name, milady?
Luna: …….. You….. don’t know my name already?
Supernova: Oh of course I do! I’ve been serving you for quite some time now. I’d just like to hear it from you otherwise it wouldn’t be a proper introduction now would it?
Luna: I suppose not. Well, my name is Princess Luna.
Supernova: Such a lovely name. My name is Supernova but you can call me whatever you’d like.
Luna: It’s a pleasure to meet you Mr. Nova
Supernova: Mr. Nova. I like that. Anyways, the pleasure is all mine, Luna. Can I call you that? It makes things much easier.
Luna: … Yes you may. I don’t mind.
Supernova: Perfect! Luna, has anypony ever told you how absolutely stunning you are?
Luna: Ahhh… N-no I don’t think so.
Supernova: What?! That’s outrageous! That must be changed.
Luna: It’s not tha
Supernova: Luna, you are absolutely stunning. There. Much better.
Luna: Th-thank you. That’s very kind of you to say.
Supernova: Just stating the facts. Say, would you like to take a walk with me?
Luna: To where?
Supernova: Ahaha you don’t get out much do you?
Luna: Sure I do. I’ve been all over Equestria and out outside of it for many meetings and
Supernova: I’m going to take that as a no.
Luna: What do you mean?
Supernova: I mean getting put and socializing and having fun! Quite the opposite of meetings.
Luna: Hmmmm…not that much.
Supernova: Well, I, Mr. Nova, would love it if you’d go out with me sometime and I’m not taking no for an answer.
Luna: It sounds like I don’t have much of a choice.
Supernova: Oh, you do. You’re the princess after all! I’m just making it hard for you to say no with my charming personality and good looks.
Luna: You are a very interesting individual Mr. Nova
Supernova: As are you, Luna. But in the very best way possible
Luna: Ah! Oh, you startled me.
Supernova: I apologize for scaring you. I didn’t mean to. I guess it’s just a habit.
Luna: Habit?
Supernova: Yes ma’am. I’m a night guard and I specialize in suprise attacks. Not that I’m going to attack you. That’d be bad.
Luna: That’s……. fascinating. Well, I’ll be on my way then.
Supernova: Woah, woah, woah, woah. You don’t think I came all the way over here just to scare you do you?
Luna: Oh, forgive me. Are you in need of something?
Supernova: Just some of your time.
Luna: …….?
Supernova: I’d just like to talk. Get to know the Princess of the Night a little better.
Luna: …. Okay?
Supernova: So what’s your name, milady?
Luna: …….. You….. don’t know my name already?
Supernova: Oh of course I do! I’ve been serving you for quite some time now. I’d just like to hear it from you otherwise it wouldn’t be a proper introduction now would it?
Luna: I suppose not. Well, my name is Princess Luna.
Supernova: Such a lovely name. My name is Supernova but you can call me whatever you’d like.
Luna: It’s a pleasure to meet you Mr. Nova
Supernova: Mr. Nova. I like that. Anyways, the pleasure is all mine, Luna. Can I call you that? It makes things much easier.
Luna: … Yes you may. I don’t mind.
Supernova: Perfect! Luna, has anypony ever told you how absolutely stunning you are?
Luna: Ahhh… N-no I don’t think so.
Supernova: What?! That’s outrageous! That must be changed.
Luna: It’s not tha
Supernova: Luna, you are absolutely stunning. There. Much better.
Luna: Th-thank you. That’s very kind of you to say.
Supernova: Just stating the facts. Say, would you like to take a walk with me?
Luna: To where?
Supernova: Ahaha you don’t get out much do you?
Luna: Sure I do. I’ve been all over Equestria and out outside of it for many meetings and
Supernova: I’m going to take that as a no.
Luna: What do you mean?
Supernova: I mean getting put and socializing and having fun! Quite the opposite of meetings.
Luna: Hmmmm…not that much.
Supernova: Well, I, Mr. Nova, would love it if you’d go out with me sometime and I’m not taking no for an answer.
Luna: It sounds like I don’t have much of a choice.
Supernova: Oh, you do. You’re the princess after all! I’m just making it hard for you to say no with my charming personality and good looks.
Luna: You are a very interesting individual Mr. Nova
Supernova: As are you, Luna. But in the very best way possible
who writes shitty now
Great job ignoring the bulk of my post in favor of quibbles about semantics. Really shows intellectual integrity on your part.
Yea, but being the bigger man isn’t as much fun.
There’s no earthly way of knowing
Which direction we are going.
There’s no knowing where we’re rowing
Or which way the river’s flowing.
Is it raining?
Is it snowing?
Is a hurricane a blowing?
Not a speck of light is showing
so the danger must be growing.
Are the fires of hell a glowing?
Is the grisly reaper mowing?
Yes! The danger must be growing
For the rowers keep on rowing.
And they’re certainly not showing
any signs that they are slowing!
Can we NOT start this shit up again? Be the bigger man and just walk away.
-Lumino
Kind of shitty?
Try completely shitty.
Is this story kinda shitty? Yes.
Does Kilala usually write like this? No, she doesn’t. This is an obvious case of an uninspired writers flub. She ran out of ideas.
Please don’t start some moral outrage. You got dangerously close to calling her a gender traitor.
@LuminoZero
Then again, if everyone’s oc-shipping was left to public scrutiny we’d all be extremely butthurt and left wishing we’d never shared it in the first place. Seldom few can capture a believable romance when working with children’s cartoon characters and OC’s that look like sonic characters with smashed feet and hands.
[spoilter]damn good artwork tho[/spoiler]
Well I apologize, I thought you wrote the horrible story. I do apologize for that much.
However, I won’t apologize for my criticism of the story.
Well, first of all you should get some basic reading comprehension, friend. I am not the artist, as the artist tag up there would indicate.
Secondly, this character only exists retroactively. The offspring (check her tag, oc:Princess Nidra) has existed for a while, but people kept asking who the father was, leading to these drawings.
Thirdly, hmm…I had another point to make, but I forgot it. I suppose I’ll just say ‘If you don’t like it, get over it’.
Cheers;
-Lumino
The issue I have is that you took a regal Princess, a Princess with 1,000+ years of experience, a Princess that can not only dream walk, but can kick the ass of any monsters that comes out of the shadows at night.
You take this already wonderful and amazing character, and you transform her into a “shy little schoolgirl” trope and all for what? So that your OC can score a date with her by basically forcing her to agree to the date?
Yea, you’re a horrible writer and if you truly are female, then you did Lauren Faust a disservice by taking one of the best character she created and doing the opposite of what she intended for that character to be.
Lauren Faust is a feminist and she would NEVER want any of her characters be reduced to…this.
First off, before we go any further I should say that as far as the picture itself it is cute and I do like it.
Now, back. (Off) topic!
Believe me, I know sometimes all you need to get a date is ask. Still, given personality and social expectations the likely hood of a simple guard getting a date with the 2nd most powerful pony in Equestria is far fetched to say the least. Also, combine it with his other traits and it smacks too much of poor-OC syndrome.
How long was Luna alive before she was banished? We don’t know. Also, we can assume she had no mental growth on the moon, since we can see how out of touch she is with the common pony in ‘Luna Eclipsed’.
As for time, we don’t know when this takes place in timeline. But I think this all obfuscating the real issue you have with this.
-Lumino
Yea, but that is the Old Luna, the new Luna…ehh not so much.
Also, a 1,000 year old Princess is inexperience. Pony, are you being serious right now? A 1,000 year old Princess has more experience in her left hoof than your OC has in his whole body. Inexperience my ass.
C’mon, Princess Luna is the Princess of the Night, one of Equestria’s regent, a mare that keeps her country safe by fighting creatures that comes out at night (according to the comics).
I’m sorry, but Luna is horribly OOC in the fanfic that’s attached to this picture. Honestly she should’ve put Supernova in his place, thinking he can coerce such a magnificent and powerful Alicorn into a date. He should be lucky if all she does is bump him down to latrine duty instead of handing him his dishornoable discharge paper.
He asked.
If you honestly think getting a date with a girl is much harder than that, then I feel really bad for you.
Most times all you need is the confidence to step up and ask.
-Lumino
ROFL, I know right?
Overly dramatic, powerful sounding name? Check.
Talent involves something combat related? Check.
Happens to be able to charm a major character into a date with little effort or reason? Check.
Ya, this is off to a great start…
Actually, not so much. If you view this as Season 1/2 Luna, I think it would mesh very nicely with what we saw of her in ‘Luna Eclipsed’.
She isn’t dumb, she’s just inexperienced with the ways of the new world. Nothing about how she carries herself in this strikes me as horribly OOC.
Ignorant, not stupid.
-Lumino
My criticism still stands. Princess Luna is way out of character in the story. She wouldn’t be acting like a shy little schoolgirl who “allowed herself” to be coerced into a date with one of her guards.
She’s a monarch for Luna’s sake, and in the comics she’s a warrior Princess! She wouldn’t be startled by a “Sneak attack”. She’d probably kick the guard ten times before he hits the ground.
Kind of funny, considering the artist/writer is female.
-Lumino
Yea, the artwork is okay, but the story attached to the artwork sucks.