Lord Waite
Just thought I’d give my own feedback on a few things I noticed:
- The two lines normally going across the gradient portion of the eye are missing. I have occasionally seen times where they were missing on the show, but they are usually present, so that jumped out at me a bit. I usually do that in a layer above the gradient, clipped to the layer below it.
- Some of the lines aren’t antialiased. I didn’t really notice that much until I looked at it at 100%, but the black line around her eye and her mane lines are both looking rather jagged in spots.
- While not absolutely necessary, I’d suggest her panties and the towel she is lying on be different colors from each other, for contrast.
- I’m not sure her tail and head are casting shadows. _
On the background: - Putting some sort of grainy texture under the yellow gradient might make it look more like sand.
- Over all, it’s too blurry. I’d suggest sharp lines separating the beach from the water and the water from the sky, and also around the clouds.
All that said, it’s looking good, and your coloring’s coming along. I certainly wasn’t as good as that when I first started coloring your pictures!