Sunset walked over to whoever it was. “Oh hi Nurse Redheart! What do you need?” she asked the nurse. “I have the results of the examination from when you got back from Everfree and I don’t think you’re going to like it.” Nurse Redheart hesitantly said. “Is it anything serious?” Sunset Shimmer asked; wondering what was going on inside her body. “You could say that.”
I would write the following like this:
When Sunset looked behind her to see who Snails was pointing to, she saw the familiar sight of Nurse Redheart walking down the narrow hallway into the room she was standing in. “Good morning, Sunset,” Redheart said as she walked in, a mild look of concern apparent on her face.
“Uh, hi,” Sunset replied somewhat anxiously. She had remembered that prior to attending Camp Everfree, she checked in with the nurse to have an ultrasound. In her mind, she was dreading the result. Redheart was holding a clipboard which contained the official results of Sunset’s ultrasound scan.
Her face said it all. “I’ve procured the results for the ultrasound you had last week,” Redheart confirmed, taking a second to continue on, “although, it may come as a shock to you.” Unfortunately for Sunset, this didn’t help her worries in any way.
“Is this… serious?” Sunset inquired, lightly scratching her arm while waiting anxiously for her inevitable results. The nurse poked around with her clipboard until she found the official results of the scan.
“I would say so.”
It’s only a small part, but I hope it gives you a good idea of the formatting and structure.