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Page 25 of NTO is done.
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Thanks for the advice. I’ll be sure to make good use of it. And as for the questions. Hmm.. Yes, it is canon. This is a common problem with healers, and there is only one way to fix it. Gum Heart would go to the slime village to reform those ponies. Once they are reformed, a goo mare by the name “…” would have the prey sit in one spot next to each other to perform a spell that will “partly” erase their memories of them being eating and digested. Once that is done, the goo mare “…” will have slime guards escort them out of the village and back into Ponyville. Thus those ponies won’t say anything about the situation if they don’t remember.~ Gum Heart dose feel a little bad about digesting prey that wanted to be heal, so she needs to find other ways to keep her greedy stomach from digesting the prey inside. There are a few ways, but this one is mostly common~ >>3374228 I do have a lot of plans to do after NTO, so hopefully I can get these pages out soon. ♡
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What I can recommend is that when writing a comic story, it’s good keep things simple and easy to follow.
If what you want is to create a world around this story, then develop it little by little and create expectations for the next project you have in mind about this story, so that you can give it continuity and create interest in what could happen next.
Didn’t anyone ask him about her patients?
How she hide his prey’s cutie marks?
prey’s cutie mark fade over time once their magic has been completely assimilated?
Does she feel bad about what she did or does she just feel disappointed in herself for falling into temptation again?
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All I can say is that this comic was supposed to be really short, which is why I didn’t write anything down… Yes, I know that is silly, but for some reason, I kept going, and now we’re here. The next pages should be better now that I wrote some stuff down for them. My apologies for this sloppy mess, I promise you, this would have been a whole lot better and shorter if I wrote stuff down. Either way, thanks for commenting.
I mean, at this rate I’m going to assume that you will create another arc before continuing with the one on this page or you will continue with something else like Sour Drop on her date with the one who was going to be her prey.